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 Fourth Glance [[02]]

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PostSubject: Fourth Glance [[02]]   Thu Feb 28, 2008 1:09 pm

Fourth Glance
Chapter 2

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"Why do I love you so much?
Why must everything you do interest me so?
It's infuriating
Thinking about you every single day
But knowing that you can't ever like me back the same way."
-Verse 2 of Naruto's poem to Sakura.
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Hinata looked at Naruto and sighed. Why must she always be so shy? If she was brave enough, she would go up to him and ask him out right now. But of course, that's just wishful thinking. That's close to impossible. She knew she couldn't keep up the guise for long. His voice always made her melt and his mere touch made her feel faint.

But he liked Sakura, and his eyes showed great admiration for her. His mouth would only utter words of affection for her, and just seeing her would always make him feel better, like she had eased off his burdens.

And she knew she could never compete with that.

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"…And that's the reason why we were sending you the notes."

Ino said, smiling at her. Reiko stared back at her blankly. So they were just trying to help, she thought to herself. It sure didn't seem like it.

Ino had taken some time out of her busy schedule during the first interval to befriend the 'new girl'. She normally wouldn't be seen with new students, but something about Reiko interested her. Of course, there was when she stood up to the most terrifying boy she knew, but there was something else; something…almost magical about her. Ino shook her head. That was childish thinking.

"So," Reiko said, snapping Ino out of her thoughts. "You say that Gaara has a bad reputation? Why is that?"

"Well," Ino said frowning. "I heard that he nearly murdered a boy in his old school, once." Reiko shook her head.

"You 'heard'? Those are most likely just gossip." Reiko stood up to leave.

"Where are you going, Reiko? The break's nearly finished."

"I just need to do something. I'll just catch up later to you guys if I'm late."

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Naruto looked for Sakura, but it seems that she went into hiding - most likely from him. He sighed. Sakura seemed to have no interest in boys whatsoever. His chance of getting a date with her was getting slimmer.

After a few minutes of searching, Naruto found her in the library, sitting comfortably on a bean bag, reading a book. He sat down next to her.

"Hi," he said grinning at her. Sakura ignored him. He looked down. "Sakura, just tell me…why don't you like me? Is it my hair? Because if it is, I could dye it! Black, brown, white…whatever you want!! Is it my eyes? I'll wear contacts if you want me to!! If it's the way I act, I'll change that as well!! What will it take for you to go on a date with me?"

Sakura snapped her book shut and thought about it. Naruto really would do everything for her… He was nice, and caring, and thoughtful…

She sighed.

"Okay, Naruto," she said as she stood up. "I'll go on a date with you…but just this once."

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"Hinata!"

Hinata turned around and saw Naruto running towards her. He looked happier than ever. She wondered what possibly could have been the good
news that made him act like this.

"Guess what!" he said, practically screaming at her. She shrugged her shoulders, already giving up. He grinned while jumping up and down. "Sakura finally said yes!"

Hinata stood there, utterly shocked. She swore she heard the sound of breaking. And she knew, right then, that it was her heart.

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A/N: Here is the
second chapter! I'm sorry I had to do this to Hinata, but I promise it will get
better… hopefully. Please review! Constructive criticism is welcome!
Thanks!


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PostSubject: Re: Fourth Glance [[02]]   Fri Feb 29, 2008 3:07 am

Wow! I LOVE THIS! :D You got Hinata just right! :D

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PostSubject: Re: Fourth Glance [[02]]   Fri Feb 29, 2008 4:51 am

Thanks!! But I feel sad that I had to do that to Hinata though :(

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PostSubject: Re: Fourth Glance [[02]]   Fri Feb 29, 2008 5:24 am

Yeah... :( Hinata is such a cute character!

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