You guys, tell me what you think and please give me some advice. Thanks!
Sometimes I think
We're drifting apart,
Because I know things change.
Sometimes I think
You're using me,
Because I'm out of your range.
Sometimes I think
You're hiding yourself,
Because of your unreal smiles.
Sometimes I think
We're kidding ourselves,
Because of the lies.
Our friendship was real,
But now it isn't so.
Was it even real in the first place?
I don't know.
But I guess our friendship
Was just a disguise,
Merely and illusion,
For both our eyes.
Because we both have something to gain from it.
___________
I'm going to send it in for a poetry contest, so please give all the advice you can. thanks!