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Reiko
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PostSubject: Sometimes   Fri Jun 08, 2007 12:52 pm

You guys, tell me what you think and please give me some advice. Thanks!

Sometimes I think
We're drifting apart,
Because I know things change.

Sometimes I think
You're using me,
Because I'm out of your range.

Sometimes I think
You're hiding yourself,
Because of your unreal smiles.

Sometimes I think
We're kidding ourselves,
Because of the lies.

Our friendship was real,
But now it isn't so.
Was it even real in the first place?
I don't know.

But I guess our friendship
Was just a disguise,
Merely and illusion,
For both our eyes.

Because we both have something to gain from it.

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I'm going to send it in for a poetry contest, so please give all the advice you can. thanks!

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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes   Sat Jun 09, 2007 9:04 pm

I really love it! I've been writing a song that sounds kinda like that too! Creepy, huh? But anyway, I think that it is perfect just the way it is!

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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes   Sun Jun 10, 2007 9:10 am

Freaky!!! And guess what! That's what we made a song with the music mentor!!! I was really flattered!! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol!

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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes   Sat Jun 30, 2007 8:17 pm

you should be! its great!

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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes   Sun Jul 08, 2007 7:28 am

yeah, that's really moving!

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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes   Sun Jul 15, 2007 4:49 am

Thank you!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes   Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:29 pm

de nada!
translation: you're welcome!

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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes   Mon Jan 14, 2008 2:53 pm

That poem is really great.

I don't know why but I like this one alot.
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PostSubject: Re: Sometimes   Tue Jan 15, 2008 4:16 am

Aww...Thanks!!

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